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Kiiro Heiwa

Post  Tarranium on Tue Jul 05, 2011 1:15 am

Name: Kiiro Heiwa

Visual age: 15

Actual age: 10.5

Rank: Trainer

Likes Likes to battle, likes to take care of pokemon, likes to be outside.

Dislikes Criminals, people who use pokemon for their own greedy needs,

Appearance: Avatar......

Personality: Cheerful, happy, knows a difference between good and bad.

Pokémon:
1. Charmander, male Nickmane: Doragon
2. Nidoran Female Nickmane: Josei
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Pokémon's Personality: Charmander:
Follows orders.
Loyal.
Gold hearth

Moves:
Flamethrower
Metal Claw
Slash
Hone Claws

Ability: Blaze:
Raises fire type attacks when hit hard.

Nidoran Female:
Shy
Loyal
Tries to follow orders

Moves:
Poison Jab
Attract
Bite
Double Team

Ability: Poison Point:
Has a chance to poison target if it attacks Nidoran directly.

History: Orenjis past isnt something he likes to talk about.
His parents broke up when he was only eight, his brother always teases him.
And to top it all he never gained any friends because he knew more about pokemon than humans.
His brother doesnt hate him but always teases him of his mistakes to make him understand pokemon ans himself better.
Kiiro never really studied in school and such, instead he took care of pokemon at their day care.

Kiiros family owned an day care, thus he and his brother fell in love with pokemon.
Kiiro himself always took care of the young and weak, while his brother took care of the rare and unique.

His brother always took care of him since their parent were busy divorsing fighting and taking care of pokemon.
Kiiros brother taught him how pokemon feel and how they are living brathing creatures just like humans.

When he left Kiiro to go on his pokemon journey Kiiro started reading about pokemon, their evolutions how they act why they battle.
Now Kiiro is ten and has started his journey just a few months ago, while his brother has already been out in this world for over three years already.
Will Kiiro find his brother or not?

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RP Sample

IMPORTANT:
This is a viewpoint of an pokemon, not a human.



It was dark, nights are.
It was midnight and there was a shadow in the darkness, cornered scared little thing.
A Raichu little bit different than normal raichus.

This one was a lot smaller than normal raichus, almost the size of a pikachu.
Also this ones fur was different color, rather than being 'normal' orange it was very light orange almost yellow.
Its tail was also shorter due to its size, this one was a female holding her ears with her tail wrapped around her.

This thunder storm was so powerful it destroyed trees and started fires, every pokemon was scared but this one was especially.

A thunder struck in the air and she was screaming in fear making a small lake with her tears of fear.

HOURS LATER........

It was morning, the storm had ended.
The little Raichu stepped out of her cover, very slowly making sure that the storm had passed.

When she was certain the storm had passed she ran out and continued running.
She could see the effects of the storm, it was wet everywhere and a lot of trees had either been burned or were pulled out with theyre roots from the ground.
It was horrible but she didnt stop she was acting out from sheer insctict and panic, run away from danger.

Even thou the danger was over her fear took over, she was hungry tired shivering from cold
and dry because of the crying and sweating.
She was so scared she had completly lost her sense of direction.

She was running towards a human city.



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Love Interest: Not yet
Family: Is an lonesome traveler, has parents and a big brother who also travels around.
Rivals: His brother
Best Friends/s: Not yet


Last edited by Tarranium on Wed Jul 06, 2011 5:28 am; edited 2 times in total (Reason for editing : Better)
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Re: Kiiro Heiwa

Post  Isaac on Tue Jul 05, 2011 1:59 am

ok theres one problem here, pokemon are allowed to only have 4 moves in total and since you are starting off you should make that charmeleon a charmander
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Re: Kiiro Heiwa

Post  Tarranium on Tue Jul 05, 2011 5:12 am

Alrigth chanced
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Re: Kiiro Heiwa

Post  Isaac on Tue Jul 05, 2011 11:34 am

ok it looks good but one more thing i looked over another person who got accepted as a trainer he had his moves not all powerful like yours are and aslo you have to add abilitys now since we just installed this, just dumb them down a bit also change the nidorina to its first stage and ill put my seal of approval
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Re: Kiiro Heiwa

Post  Tarranium on Wed Jul 06, 2011 5:30 am

Fixed.

Sorry I just got a little excited because so far this is actully the only good pokemon RP site I have been on, and I have been on several.
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Re: Kiiro Heiwa

Post  Isaac on Wed Jul 06, 2011 10:55 am


APPROVED
just approving you since i wont be on until friday or saturday
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